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#1 2007-07-05 00:11:48


Jeff


New Member, old poem

I thought I would start by saying hello, and since this is a place for poetry, I figured I had better post one! My name is Jeff, but everyone calls me Smiley since I generally always am smiling.


I wrote this after thinking about the Witch trials.

  Death of humanity  �

Pillars of destiny
Standing tall and proud
Surrounded by thousands 
I was part of the crowd 
Watching and waiting
for the fire to consume 
taking the woman 
the child in her womb 
power enshrined   
in a body so young 
she must be destroyed   
not simply hung 
the power she wields 
is not from this earth 
her unborn child 
she cannot birth 
a demon inside 
said the preacher out loud 
and screams for her death 
came from the crowd 
with her last breath 
she spoke as a plea 
just these last words 
“blessed be"

�   ï¿½   Jeff Hall  May 14, 2005

#2 2007-07-05 11:51:28


Maiden S
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Re: New Member, old poem

Hello & welcome, Smiley smile

I really like the ending ~ it ties everything together in a very powerful way!!

#3 2007-07-05 18:50:23


Jeff


Re: New Member, old poem

Thanks for the comment smile

#4 2007-07-11 00:42:59


Eagle Ma
n always
vigilan
t.


Re: New Member, old poem

Wow, really cool! I liked it.

#5 2007-12-24 14:30:16


Luna


Re: New Member, old poem

wow, that's so strong. i really like it. smile